44 – Golden

For the first time, I am using the mobile WordPress app to create a post. It’s actually quite easy and innovative and the Swype keyboard method makes writing quick on a phone.

Now onto this 44 word poem of mine, about spilling baskets:

Golden eyed
Splash
city
Spill
it
down
Going for magic
Can’t stop now
Ring
of
honor
Eye on the prize
Gold in sight
Gotta comeback
Don’t give it to them
Finish them now
This is your time
Storybook season
Win that hardware
Back in Cleveland

But
…obviously you failed

DVerse Poets: Spill

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Author: Macbofisbil

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8 thoughts on “44 – Golden”

  1. What fun you are using the WP app. I;ve been doing this on my table for several months now and truly enjoy it. Excellent poem. How nice it must be to start all over again with a blank slate.

  2. Love the rhythm of this, and the spirit of “spill” (of baskets) within. I’ll love it even more if you can slip the word spill into the main body of the poem. 😉

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